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Breadcrumbs2021
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RAIN APOLOGY

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life

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I TRIED TO WARN YOU
BUT YOU DID NOT LISTEN
A PUDDLE OF WATER
THAT SHINES AND GLISTENS
YOU’RE MOVING TO FAST
TO NOTICE YOUR DIRECTION
THERE’S A STORM UP AHEAD
A HURRICANE JUST TORE THROUGH
YOUR WINDOWPANE
THAT SENT YOU FLYING
IN PAIN
AND ALL YOU HAD TO SAY
IT LOOKS LIKE RAIN


 

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2b2b2 says:

Powerful Petit Piece....thanks for sharing....ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Wow! Breadcrumbs2021, it's beginning to look like rain in the flow of a thunderstorm. Thanks again. Love the metaphoric wordp[lay. Peace and Love.

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