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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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It took awhile for me to receive this It took awhile for me to open up upon seeing where it came from It took awhile for me to consume and digest the contents It took awhile for me to find words that wouldn't be taken out of context It took awhile for me to fold up the sheets It took awhile for me to stuff the envelope It took awhile for me to seal it up to keep it all from coming apart It took awhile for me to find a suitable postage stamp to insure proper delivery It took awhile for me to send it off It took awhile for me to search and find something to put it in It took awhile for me to find paper to put it on It took awhile for me to find time to run the mind across these lines It took awhile for me to speak in pen It took awhile for me to convince the other self not to commit the first thou shalt not again It took awhile for me to feel the effect of the medicine and shake the side effects It took awhile for me to heal It took awhile for me to gain feeling again in the snake bitten hand that fed a reptile It took awhile for me to give a response It took awhile for me to forgive It took awhile for me to just let it be It took a long while for me to decide to allow it to live and to breathe

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed! And it has only taken me 79 5 months! Breathe before a knee presses on your neck! Peace and Love. Keeping on Breathing---sending you whatever oxygen left for me to "footprint" share. Peace and Love.

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