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Trou8l3
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when the sun goes down

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life

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Its been quite some time now,

conversing with a known stranger,

video calls, and text,

you ask whats next,

before the silence grew, im sure you knew

Mentally i wanted to stay 

emotionally i had to go

And yet , you took things slow

the tone of your voice pulled strings like 

a violinst plucking at my most sacret desires

like flashing signs for "HIRE"

no matter what i told my self im not a liar

closing doors half way shut

like eyes shut wide open

puzzled pieces with no direction

my thoughts dismantled in the right position

unknowingly willing to agree,

what is this hold you have on me.

potentially I strive into perfection of my imperfections 

unconditionally loving me

when flaws change with experience

as to knowledge staind the wise ones,

With every word that spilled her lips

like paint from a pail

I tasted her ideas, like popping coins down a wishing well

 framed pictures in coloring books

it took a while to see, this painted picture

wasnt for me...

 

imma end this an get some sleep, so leave a message 

at the sound of the beep..........----------------------------------------------------------------------BEEP

 

 

 

 

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Newpanther says:

excellent juxta positioning........
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The Immortal Wize says:

I enjoyed reading every bit of this.
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2b2b2 says:

Tight piece...and the way you flipped the script....thanks for sharing!!

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