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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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my child your child their child our child still a child still in need of love and nurturing like a house plant needs sun and water to grow or it will die a shrub my child your child their child die in record numbers one after another who is to blame them the system or father and mother we could point fingers put the blame on each other "it's not my child it's not your child it's not our child it's their child still it's a child who should laugh who should smile and be content from all the amenities that comes with adolescence but they don't and some that do still play with sticks and drums if it don't bang it ain't no fun inside a simulation of fortnite outside looking for something to kill to watch it die never say what your child won't do unless the mind of the child belongs to you and you are adamantly in control of what they do my child your child our child their child has the needs of a child but a mind of their own to choose their own toy regardless of the choice we made hindsight is still 20/20 and my child your child their child our child is still dying senseless deaths out here in these streets and it ain't a damn thing we can do about the mind frame of a child who doesn't have the ability to understand that the game is serious I don't know about you but I can't grasp the fact that my child your child their is out of our hands and getting out of hand as I recall correctly "wasn't that the initial plan

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mlowe5 says:

Right on, Poet Wize! Love the title and profound message therein. We MUSTClaim "The Baggage" and re-pack it with true peace, love, watering care, and the sunshine of liberating growth. Thanks for this twice-read share. Peace and Love.

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