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Old Testament

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life

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Pouring down
Like the Noah forty day downpour
Covering my earth
overflowing my seas
blackness
my vision
no form seen before me

your touch
sending signals to my brain
bypassing detour signs
and blinking street lights along the way
just missed a collision
from something coming from the other direction
ignoring the speed limit

lightning strikes
unseen
its thunder stirs my silence
a momentary twitch
and I am upright once again

floods
I hear the waves outside
calling my name 
public address announcer
SCREAMING
"next in line"

it ends
blackness gone
the carnage lay before me
seas
receding back to the arid of yesterday 

your touch
the signals returning to the acceptable speed limits
pedestrians 
safe to once again cross the streets

"good morning, baby..."

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mlowe5 says:

Wow! Great metaphoric imaging rhythmic flow that had me jumping back forth and left me soaked and wet! What a morning! Great share. Thanks. Write on, Newpanther! Peace andLove.
 

Newpanther says:

thank you for your shining light, mentor!

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mlowe5 says:

ONE. Peace and Love.
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2b2b2 says:

Tight Work....well played....ONE

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