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RighteousRee
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romance

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Me

I wasn't quite sure

because of my silly insecurities

but you assured my doubts

I...

I....was

In love with your whimsical words and

passionate affirmations........you

Made me a foreigner to the "real world"

you...

you..

You blessed

and caressed

my mind

into a sweet melodic freedom

of birds whispers and

butterfly symphonies

gravity had no hold on me

weightless the wind carried

my idle thoughts

and made nothing of

my worries and concerns

You made me Queen

of your castle in the clouds

fed me ambrosia and nectar

we sat nourished and full on the seams of the sky

and watched the sun descend to its slumber

letting the moon take its place in glory

DEEP

our conversations resembled the expanse of the heavens

our movements in line with the constellations

How can words afford such a description...?

We..

We...

WE exist

beyond the rainbows end

beyond reality

beyond comprehension

a truth that can only

be defined...in

our....minds

our...escape

our....world....

 

Such freedom is bliss..

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mlowe5 says:

ONE, RighteousRee. A great metaphoric rhythmic flow from beginning to end. Enjoyed. Peace and Love.
 

UnderWorldLyricist says:

Oh yes....that sacred love experience in the etheric realm. Your speak volumes. I vibe with this energy!
 

UnderWorldLyricist says:

Oh yes....that sacred love experience in the etheric realm. You speak volumes. I vibe with this energy!
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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