when I look at you you're dead to me it's as if I watch you take your last breath and leave the scene relieved you heard from me now let me hear from you but silence fills the room did I render you speechless do you not have words for me to rebut to refute negate dispute tear down and declare to be untrue do you have enough ammonition in you to blow my testimonial statement out the water and shoot it down in flames or do you choose to remain silent because you can't contradict a thing lacking ability to impeach a word of my speech and unorthodox way I preach I'm fully equipped to answer everything called into question concerning me anything you disagree with or take issue with instead of fiercely criticizing private matters publicly it would be easy for me to impede your need breath that being said shall we have a heart to heart instead of a moment of unnecessary violence
The Immortal Wize
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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize
Ignition Completewhy do this enemy want to be my enemy what is this enemy interest in me why is this enemy drawn to me why do this enemy follow my light how long do we play Cat and Mouse Cops and Robbers Cowboys and Indians is this enemy a foe from a past life do this enemy want to fight me is this enemy planning to take a life what did I do to create this enemy what did I do to I attract this type of energy to me I don't know this enemy personally this enemy is pressure it cost a lot to be stress free I guess we always been enemies every body can't be a allie somebody gotta be aversive in the who done it and how come  |
Stop Itstop trying to make it perfect stop trying to get it right stop trying to straighten it up stop trying to fix it you done enough |
You Knowyou know what this is you know how you know what this is you know what this is because it's a feeling you felt before no one can tell you it's not that when you know it is you never forget a feeling no matter how long ago you felt it a feeling can't change the way it feel you know what this is don't you |
Thatyou know what this is you know how you know what this is you know what this is because it's a feeling you felt before no one can tell you it's not that when you know it is you never forget a feeling no matter how long ago you felt it a feeling can't change the way it feel you feel what this is don't you |
Be Youit's not that that don't like you as much it's they not looking like you they don't have nothing in common with you and you don't have nothing in common with them you different be different stay different don't change a thing about you it's not that they don't like you as much as it's they not like you you don't need to be alike "be you" |
Leaveyou didn't get on the plane you didn't board the train you missed the bus the ship sailed without you those awaiting your arrival knew you were running late but still thought you were on the way so they continued to wait but you changed your mind and decided to stay and wait on those who you thought needed you more than those waiting for you to arrive you were going somewhere but decided not to after you been used you decide to leave but when you arrive you'll find yourself alone those who patiently wait will not wait for long those who hold you back will always stab you in the back every chance is a chance to live a better life don't keep others waiting for you to decide to leave those who don't want to see you go "GO" |
Modea simple mind can figure out complex things and not forget all the details a complex mind can complicate things bring down the plane derail the train and scramble a egg inside its shell in the tale the scarecrow was simple minded if he only had brain a simple mind is defined foolish feeble and artless like "an artless literary masterpiece" can be the mastery of a mastermind a simple mind will fool you every time a complex mindset is set on predictability |
Split Levelwould you hold the ladder steady for me to climb to the top if I promise to reach down and pull you up would you trust me enough would you help me up if I promise to do the same for you knowing if I break a promise to you I break something inside of you once broken can never be fixed would you take the risk when it's evident it's something broken inside of me impossible to fix could you handle the suspense the unpredicted double stranded plot twist sitting on the edge of the seat breathless stranded in a remote location no bars 2% battery life on the device waiting for a stranger to return with a gas can give you a hand what would that feel like the thought fearful the reality tearful the stranger could be the Roadside Strangler fixing your flat putting air in your tires now you're in danger would you hold the ladder for me to climb to the top I can't promise I'll return the same |
Stories Advice & WisdomI imagine my mother my mothers mother and my mothers mother, mother in one room talking to me ministering to me telling me to bend with the wind putting the fight in me strengthening the roots under me telling me to be the tree I'm listening in disbelief is this a dream I'm having or is it really happening taking notes in case I forget I start to scetch the one I never met the one who left before I came all I knew was her name she was dark tough skin like tree bark glowing eyes and bushy hair she wore no smile she told me these are serious times reality of illusion blurred the lines the one who disciplined my mother and the one who disciplined my mothers mother chastised me then took me to the river and baptized me kicking and screaming I realized the open resistance wasn't pleasing to their eyes then to my surprise I felt the warmth of loving eyes shine on me then I wrote this quote "though dark clouds may form in the a grayest sky there's always gone be a silver line" |
Tone Setterwe are creators of moments we create our moments when we get up from sitting down and walk across the room the movement created the moment of standing on the other side of the room it only takes a moment to change positions we are creators of countless moments we create our moods |