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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Overboard

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I tend to go off the deep end with a pen it depends how wide the gap to dive in but still have yet to drown in the depth of liquid sin can I talk my sh** can I let off some rounds I won't aim for the sky I promise to shoot down break some ground Ill bring you up from being down if you do the same for me when I'm in too deep been to the top from there landed on the bottom I know it's danger in the sea it's also safer under water it's like going inside seeing your heart beat for the first time wondering if you touch it what it will feel like a inflated balloon or fuzzy like red tennis ball perhaps none of the above I tend to ask questions when I'm bored with your hand on the cord would you pull the plug I shrug I don't know I take a sip of my drink I marvel at how I think of dying of thirst while watching fish in a tank while crying over running out of ink

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mlowe5 says:

May your cistern of creative ink remains as full as the sea. Peace and Love.
 

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