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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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Pointless

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The reason for the anger and rage was pointless but the knife in my hand definitely had a point to it. I used it as an extension of my rage and the blood was enough to fill a barrel and a half. I half paused between thrusts and in that reflection of that red liquid pool I saw the real me. 

I was frustrated and alone and I raged from being frustrated and alone. I wanted more from this world of smoke and mirrors, the guys being the ones who smoke and the girls being the ones who mirror. I was in love with myself and didnt even know it.

I wanted more than I had to offer but still believed the world was mine. I took the hand full of blood of lifes betrayal and realized I need to do better. 

What a way to learn a lesson and miss a blessing. I missed the whole point of it. My knife was sharp but my rage was pointless.

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mlowe5 says:

Profound, love_supreme! Thanks for sharing this pointing poetic allegorical awareness message. Indeed, "What a way..." Peace and Love.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Our open wounds can go untreated for so long that we continue to bleed all over our situation and those who come in contact with us. This is very powerful, deeply piercing and definitely in need of a transfusion. Much Respect!
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2b2b2 says:

Poignant penning....yup rage is a helluva drug....always....thank God for channels, few is for naught, if in the end much is learned to discern and pass on.....Namaste
 

love_supreme says:

Thank you!

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mlowe5 says:

ONE! Peace and Love.

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