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Itchy

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Itchy, Real Name Keenan S., Age 17, City Dallas Tx., Year 1991

Itchy Was One Of My Neighborhood Friends That Also Attended The Local High School With Me

He Was Quiet About His Issues Battling Dry SkinThat Caused Him To Itch

In The Neighborhood We Resided We Were Less Than Middle Class But Itchy Showed It Wearing Consistantly The Same Worn Out Clothes And Shoes Everyday

One Day While Leaving Out Of Our Final Class Itchy Told Me That Today Will Be His Last Day Of Attendance And He Will Be Dropping Out Of School

He Shared With Me About His Household Struggle And In Desperate Need Of Money

Fast Foward, Three Months Have Past And I'll Never Forget This Day

Itchy Showed Up At My Moms HouseTo Show Me His Brand New Cadillac Sedan Deville On Triple Gold Daytons

He Was Dressed In Blue Rayon From Top To Bottom

Blue Gator Shoes, Gold Earrings, Gold Teeth, Two Four Fingered Gold Rings, And Hair Grew Finger Waved

We Dapped Up Then Itchy Came Inside To Say Hello To My Moms

She Looked At Itchy And Said, Baby You Look Like Money, Where Have You Been, And Whose New Car Is That?

Itchy Smile And Replied Saying,"Oh Mine Maam"

Ithcy Stayed For A Whille But Shared Something With Me Before Leaving

He Told Me That He Was In The Dope Game But He Rather Not Share The Details

I Told Him, Man Don't You Know That This Sh*t Want Last Forever

He Laughed And Said, "TEE I Want Live Forever"

Itchy Left

Time Went On, Weeks, Months, And Even A Year

One Night Sounded Asleep

I Heard What Sounded Like Small Rocks Crashing Hitting My Window Payne

I Got Up, Looked Out My Window And There Stood Itchy In My Backyard

I Opened My Window And Yelled Silently, What The Hell Are You Doing Dog?

He Said, I'll Tell You Later But Please Bro I Need Something To Eat I Am Hungry

I Threw Him A Can Of Spam And A Loaf Of Bread

I Asked, Where Are You Going?

He Became Silent As He Walked Away Into The Darkness 

The Next Time I Saw Ithcy Was Fall Of 1992

He Was Sitting On A Bench In The Park Next To The Red Bird Recreation Center

I Was Coming Out Of The Rec. When He Called Me Over

I Said, What Up Itchy? As With Dapped Up

He Started By Thanking Me For The Food That I Give Him That Night Then Began Talking About But A Change But He Was In The Game To Deep

He Also Told How Highly He Respect My Mother For Having A Home And Caring For Her Only Son

Then He Went On Saying That His Parents Don't Give A Damn All They Think About Is The Street Life And Thats Exactly How I Know That I Want Live To See 21

I Replied, Man Don't Claim That Over Your Life And Left Him With A Word Of Encouragement

I Told Him If My Mother A Black Single Woman Could Get Off Of Her Butt To Work Hard To Obtain A Good Paying Job To Get Herself And Her 7 Yr Old Son Out Of The Desire Projects Of New Orleans Louisiana Riddled With Crimes/Murders To A House Here In Dallas Texas. Anything Is Possible If You Just Believe.

That Was The Last Time That I Saw Itchy

One Saturday Morning I Was Awakened By My Friend Tyson Was Ringing Our Doorbell Franticly

I Opened The Door To Tyson Wearing A Blood Covered T-Shirt Pacing Crying Screaming, ITHCYS DEAD ITCHYS DEAD!!!!

My Mom Came Out To Calm Tyson And To Have A Set On Porch

With His Legs Shacking Out Of Control He Was Able To Tell Me What Happened The Night Before

He Said, It Was Me, Itchy And Abor Hanging Chilling At Club Box

Itchy Was Dancing With Some Chic That Was A Fox

The Next Thing You Know Some Dude(Her Boyfriend) Hauld Off And Stole Itchy In The Face

The Whole Entire Club Errupted

The Security Cleared Out Everyone By Spraying Pepper Spray In The Air

Itchy And Ole Dude Continued The Fight In The Parking Lot Til The Laws Showed Up

We Hopped In Itchys Car And Rolled Out

We Were Rolling Down Camp Wisdom  When I Noticed A White Ford Taurus Had Pulled Up On The Drivers Side Of The Car

I Was Buzzing But I Could Hear Itchy And Another Guy Cussing At Each Other From Car To Car

All Of A Sudden I Heard A Boom And Saw A Flash

My Reaction Was Quick So I Ducked But When I Looked Up-Man(Shacking).

I Think Ole Dude Shot Itchy In The Head With A Sawed Off 12 Gauge 

His Head Blew Apart Infront Of Me And Man I Sobered Immediately 

I Freaked Out My Adrenaline Went To The Roof As The Car Wrecked Into A Tree Infront Of A Church

I Got Out Broke A Window At The Church To Found A Phone Then Called 911

This Is A True Story

I'll Never Forget You Itchy

TEEDUB815

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks,TEEDUB815. A profound capturing canvass. An even more powerful allegorical message. Been there! Born in Texas, 1942. Thanks for the sharing of these keloid memories. ONE! Peace and Love. ("TEX" Lowe [SNCC: Arkansas Project].
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2b2b2 says:

Powerfully Stark....thanks for sharing....ONE

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