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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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deep in a virtual world trying to swim back to reality fell in contempt tempted to wet my feet thought I was on the shallow end before falling in feet didn't touch the ground almost drown in my assumption held my breath as long as I could before I surfaced it's hard to keep your head above water when you drowning and you nervous anxious and lethargic life flashes before me and I see a slideshow I never saw before depressing repressive memories stressing me out to no end in sight I see blood but the sight don't bother me none innocent until found guilty of holding a smoking gun blunt instrument or bloody knife realm to realm playing both sides call a Uber or bum a ride either way gas is highway robbery nothing wrong with the feet it's dangerous on the street when predictors need to eat Robinhood is dead and all his Merry Men the rich still rich the poor still poor and crimes on steroids you ain't got a gun get one you ain't a license to carry get one you ain't got the heart to pull the trigger get one quick the tide is high war is in the sky "stay awake" it's fire in the lake avoid the deep end don't be temped to put your feet in the devil is always feeding on the knees that's hurting from all that kneeling the one's he plan on killing before reaching 5D "who you" don't forget the birth certificate don't lose the ID in case of emergency laminate the currency protect the legacy from the current transparency nine months of pregnancy out comes the baby stuck with the dose is it a stroke or is it burning toast on the shore waiting for the ship to arrive don't need to dive to be under the sea to see the spells been cast over the seeing eye on duty

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, my Brother, "...you don't have to dive into the sea..." you're already in. You need to equip yourself to stay awake, afloat, and continue to swim towards the liberating shore with all the strength you got. Must not let the labor to get you here to have been in vain. Great write Poet Wize. Enjoyed the rhythmic flow of the tracking read. Peace and Love
 

mrmelody7 says:

Always enjoyable interesting to read you Poet Wize
 

King Suspire says:

Deep, and very telling. Alot of knowledge gained. And if you don't got a gun, get one. WORD, cause the seeing eye on duty is sleeping. Peace!

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