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SEMI-COMATOSE DREAMED THOUGHTS

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Laying here in a seemingly chilled ocean breeze,

The womb of mind envisions an opened birdcage

With birdies chirping and watching a baby bay-shark

That had jumped from its imprisoning tank to be set free:-

 

As I laid there—as if on a deck-door raft—encircled

By calming waves without a drop of water that

I could drink nor a morsel of food that I was craving,

I realized there was no nearby shore around me.

 

Looking skyward, I could only see stars and a crescent moon.

Below my raft, small ocean creatures seemed to be playing

Hide and seek games as if they were out on a large desert;

In this strange nature’s canvassing, I realize I was all alone.

 

How often, I thought, in seeking to escape an imprisoning life,

We tend to find ourselves being thrust into even greater harm.

Then, in the darkness of the moment, dawning light showed me

That I was free from what was and now floating to true liberation:-

                                                                                                                                                        

 

 

 

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Contest Winner  

mlowe5 says:

Many thanks, love_supreme. Much appreciated. Peace and Love.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, Poet Wize. Peace and Love.

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