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King Suspire
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Lacuna

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    You don't know me because I don't know myself.   

I'm the joker you pull from an unshuffled deck.

   Not that I'm a joker, but what are the chances.

Of running a blind race, coming out with success.

   Slim to none, blessing or a curse I guess.

I manifest, while others recess.

   Thoughts to dissect, like an insect, without retrospect.

I digress, so you can take a breath.

   Breathe, your amongst thieves, so there's no honor.

But I'm honorable, that's how I've survived this horror.

   Yeah, yeah, I know, tomorrow.

But don't see what I see, in the mirror.

   Was I an error, whatever, I doubt there's many to equate the figures.

To give a percentage, on the likelihood I'll be committed.

   Likelihood of success has no commitment.

So I commit without a comity in a community without commitment.

   To determine if I'm crazy or not, and have no resentments.

Though I'm possibly the cause of the news story you resented.

   Seems to be the only way I'm augmented.

But all should separate like a segment, and observe the bridge before you cross it.

   To see how far you have to go in distance.

In order to shorten the gap, for forward progression.

   Between me and you, just be careful, and don't cross me.

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Well canvassed. I appreciate the share. True to the title. Truly a lacuna of self. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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