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Ebb & Flow (Haiku)

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Ebb & Flow

Our mood vast cross- currents

Enfold, Stir, Swell, Bend, Dip, Whirling Flux

Rippling tides of immature Emotions.

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mlowe5 says:

Nice imaging. On the second read, I got the referenced flow: 5-7-5 words as opposed to 5-7-5 syllables! Peace and Love.
 

Brownchildt says:

thank you. I tried to follow the rules, but this is what I came up with. lol

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