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Casualty

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Seems that i am bursting at the seams/in danger of capsizing even in my dreams or lacking the means

to be self-sustaining, currently

even if, in your view it is a self-inflicted wound

…is worrying me

indications of a lack of concern

an indifference to suffering that’s casual

monumental in its complicity suggesting

love does not exist anywhere where your desires

are lacking so, as you attack me once again

pressing your advantage to be unknown

to its height at the point of my greatest weakness

as i fall again, mortally wounded

realizing i can’t save myself but rely again on charity

awaiting an answer to my prayers from someone

who believes in something greater than me

perhaps even something they might see in me

which could be/if… some effort was made

to rescue me

 

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mlowe5 says:

Hmm...Evokes memory of that old saying,"Charity begins at home." A thought-provoking write, C2. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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charles2 says:

A reminder, at times we must not rely on others to do what we can do for ourselves

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