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A pirouette

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life

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i may not see this dance 

from your perspective

in each of us, 
steps taken 

have provided us ...this place

where our feet now fall.  
At close quarters,

finding naturally... a place  

we gladly slip into,
as our whole bodies 

are launched, as if, by will… 
then pause, 

to hover

leap gently 

as if to drift 

from another place 
in time and space 

in a manner 

bordering on perfection 

our motions 

mirror 

in a ripple 
of shared emotion

a magic interaction 

as if in reflection


pouring 
our whole hearts…

into each movement,

with what energies 

our life’s passions 
have supplied


with that 
our hearts seek 

to fulfill

 

C2

 

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful flowing "spin" full of an imaging allegorical message. Thanks, C2. Let the WORD dance on! Peace and Love.
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed..." with that our hearts seek to fulfill..."
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charles2 says:

Thank you. mlowe5. i'd like to send a "book" to you. This site doesn't provide the tools i prefer to use to display a full array, so i use an old-fashioned notebook and the printed pages... and page protectors.

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