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The Park (My First Haiku)

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So I'm Learning about Haiku!! This would be my first one. Be Honest!! How did I do? Share with me pointers please!! #haikupoetry #haiku #Haiku #poetry #poetrywriting #poetrytiktok #poetsoftiktok

  A walk in the Park

See all the kids go and play

This Beautiful Day

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The Immortal Wize says:

I love it, I would've used run instead of go for the action verb but that's just how I see kids in the park. It's definitely a haiku 👍🏾

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mrmelody7 says:

I am no help at all to you Never tried them it seems like work to me thinking and counting am a Lazy writer its like automatic writing for me pick up pen and go admire those who are always improving their craft

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Belindathapoet says:

You know what @The Poet Wize!! You're right Run does sound better than go. So this is a Learning experience for me. Thanks for your Advice!!

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Belindathapoet says:

LoL!! No Worries @mrmelody7 This is New to me just wanted to trying out. Best Wishes!!

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mlowe5 says:

You did well, Lightbright79. Your imaging was right on. Imaging is important in Haiku. I agree with Poet Wize. "Run" tends to excite the senses a bit more than "go". Look forward to you next Haiku! Peace and Love.

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