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lloydboy35
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lightness in the dark

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Hey Sis

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sis you was like my friend

 

there wasn't a corner

 

that I wouldn't bend for you

 

but now I feel former in this

 

present point of view

 

in me you once confided, it's like

 

you died and we divided

 

it's like the influence around you

 

grounded you

 

and inflicted change, but only

 

for the worst

 

I can't explain the past pain

 

in my head repeatedly reheaersed

 

we got a bit distant over time and

 

some of the events hadn't been quite kind

 

I missed our caring times, if we can rewind

 

and repair

 

you'll understand I still love you sis and will

 

still always be there

 

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love_supreme says:

This is a very emotional poem.

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DeleDivine says:

This is a beautiful, well composed work of art!! You are a true poet to the heart my dear. I won't be posting anymore my Brother but I will always come show you some feedback. I finally published my books and will be publishing more..:-) Keep it coming!!:-)

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lloydboy35 says:

I appreciate the love baby girl...it means a lot too me..I am so extremely happy for you..I am sure you are deserving of this success..let me know the name of your books and I will go buy them..I think you are a better poet than I am..but I am working hard everyday!! Missed you here though..may the good Lord continue to keep blessing you baby girl!!!

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