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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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first love

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Loose leaves, blown and  strewn  about

Some billow within eyesight, others far sight

Pages in  the cut,  unbreeched perfection

Quite ripe  for  intrusion or  more hard recollection

Affection came  by  way  of  black  light  screening

Staring blankly  at  one  another,  sparking  ingenuity

Fingers caress  in  poking  motions,  triggering emotions

The mind  says  “No”,  but  the  heart  says  “Yes”, “Oh yes”

So entities  once  standing  all  alone, move closer and closer

The touch causes explosions  as  sounds are  morse  coded

Pit-patter, soul food  platter,  to go,  is  the  matter  in  fact

The longer the touch,  the  wilder  the  flow  becomes

Moans of satisfaction  scream  in  minds  that  are  reached

Do you recall the first  time of your first love,  first  infatuation

You know,  the  first  time pen met  paper, or keys hit  the  screen

Love is  such  a  crazy  feeling…..

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mrmelody7 says:

As always my friend you got the flow going with your indepth imagery and classic use of words Nice scenery imagery as one reads taking some like myself many moons ago
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful, loving rhythmic flow of inspiring keloid memories. Indeed, loved the wordplay imagery. Profound as usual, 2b2b2. Continue 2b the UUR. ONE. Peace and Love.
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice!
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks kindly for checking me mrmelody....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks Sir mlowe5....Ankh Udja Seneb
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2b2b2 says:

Thank you love_supreme! ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks nosajm....appreciate ya....ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, 2b2b2! Life, prosperity, and health 2U2! ONE. Peace and Love.

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