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Ms.PoeticPassion
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Time Machine

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TIME MACHINE ME!  PLEASE!

Let me sit back and unwind

Relax my mind

Inhale----Exhale.

TRANSPORT ME!

BETTER YET, TIME MACHINE ME! PLEASE!!!!!

PAST OR FUTURE?

Take me back in time

Repeat my rythms and rhymes

Hug and kiss and joke with my mother (R.I.P)

Have a chance too meet with my brother (R,I,P)

Have a chance to be loved  by my father (R.I.P)

TIME MACHINE ME! PLEASE!!

Take me back to the good  old days

Back to the innocent days....

Back to my childhood days....

Back to the days when i knew nothing of pain.

Back to the days I knew nothing of sadness.....

TIME MACHINE ME!!!! PLEASE!!! RIGHT NOW!!!

Back to the days when I didnt have a care in this world to worry about.

Take me back to the innocent days.

When shopping carts were the way to get around town.

Saturday mornings when mom would play some Down Home Blues.

Take me back when MOM would kiss any scratch, scrape or bruise.

I wish I had a TIME MACHINE!

 

#unfinished

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mrmelody7 says:

You have a unique way of expressing yourself this one has a lot of zesto Havent read you much probably cause I only do this in the Fall and Winter I enjoy your creative work
 

Ms.Poeticpassion says:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback.

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Profound! I myself, "Time machine each and every day and night with keloid RIP memories (Mom, Dad, all Aunts and Uncles, two sons, a cousin whom I didn't know was not my Sister until I was 20 years old; and other blessed extended family members that God blessed me with. With God's and their keloid divine wisdom and guidance, each day, I'm ready to move mountains. Thanks for this astounding share. Write on, MsPoeticPassion. Peace and Love.
 

Ms.Poeticpassion says:

Thanks @mlowe5. Thanks for the feedback

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Belindathapoet says:

Thank you to All!!! Your LOVE is Appreciated!!!
 

Belindathapoet says:

I meant to say I appreciate this writing!!!!

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