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NOT A RAP...JUST AN OLD GRIOT'S TAP...

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Hey there, my child.

I think I need to

Remind you of a thing

Of two that were once

Already told to you—

In a different style:-

 

Today, the way has been

Foot printed

By ancestors who were

Un-relented:-

 

You must know and see

That when it comes to

True history,

There’s their story and

Ourstory:-

 

Again, for you;

Ancestors did more

With less,

So we with more,

Would have less to do

At our best:-

 

Oh, this may sound

Like clanging echoes

But you can’t un-ring

Bells rung by ancestral

Heroines and heroes:-

 

So, cease just sitting around

Serving old time;

Rather, get into the frame

Of mind

That makes time serve you

As you go about the awareness

Of what you need to do:-

 

The coming of our dream’s

Liberty

Is yours to evolve into its

Reality:-

So, you see, there’s actually

Nothing here new;

Just an Elder’s reminder of

What you are here to do.

 

So, get on with penning

The poetic word

In a way your generation

Can know what

You heard

When you were being

Prepared to become leaders

Of our herd:-

 

Hey, time’s waning for us old

Snooping rappers;

It’s time you now become

The brain tappers!

 

The All Seeing Eye

Is on you from above,

So, kiss all fears goodbye.

One, Peace and Love:-

 

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Peace love and light BaBa, my Elder poetic mentor. It was an honor to read such an epic, exponential, mental experimental, enlightening and encouraging piece. This wisdom in it's rarest form. Thank you for this classic. I'm inspired.
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mlowe5 says:

KingqadarDwon'! So great to hear from you. I am both honored and humbled by your inspiring feedback. I pray all has been well with you and yours. Thanks. Much appreciated. ONE. Peace and Love..

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mlowe5 says:

Many thanks, love_supreme. Just felt like giving the youths an encouraging "tap". ONE. Peace and Love.

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