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Killing A Rat

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by the fire hydrant in front of the store

a hairy creature slithers up out of the

sewer to devour the remains of the

chips in the bag on the sidewalk beside

me as if I was not standing there with

the advantage of lifting a foot and 

crushing its skull just nibbling

away as if I didn’t have it in me to

 kill a living thing are was I being

punked and dared I don’t think the

rat noticed that everyone ran from

the sight of it but me I guess I had 

something to prove standing up to 

something that stood 2.4 inches off

the ground I took a deep breath then

raised my foot 3.5 inches off the

ground but couldn’t do it 

I hate rats they repulse me but I

didn’t have the heart to mess up 

the bottom of my shoe it’s no 

different than stepping in a pile

of sh*t and why would I do that 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, Why? Are not rats also somewhat symbolic of what the oppressors think of us???!? Deep!. Thanks for the share. ONE. Peace and Love.

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