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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Dramatic Effect

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I'm telling Jordon "life is not a video game" in the midst of telling him this a new character is unlocking inside of him Jordon's new avitar is defensive its getting beside itself I realize the pending danger I'm facing and the fact that I am now standing in the room with a stranger tussling over a controller in full mortal combat fight to the death struggling with something that can only be met with fire Jordon is no longer a threat to me I don't know what to call this beast spewing obscenities extremely expressing offensive words knowing if I stoop to the level of this devil there will be hell to pay and a cost too great I stand up straight let go and let it get away realizing I was pulled into the game of life in a fight for my life a game I wasn't even playing in the first place and lose Jordon in the process of trying to gain control a out of body experience

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mlowe5 says:

Dramatic indeed. All too often, outer of body experiences can often reflect the living inter body's life living experience. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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love_supreme says:

Very nice.

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