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Mr. Brooks

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Mr. Brooks sit in a interrogation room he cries out "this is where my life ends" Mr. Brooks goes to trial and decides to defend himself Mr. Brooks looks like Boo Boo the Fool in the courtroom hoping he can object his way out of the inevitable as if by some kind of miracle the door would swing open and he could go free or change the verdict where's his parents there must be childhood trauma it has to be a reason for all the drama he's fighting for his life for not thinking before acting we can't feel sorry for the man who drove a vehicle through a parade of people and left six of em dead but it's something sorrowful about a man who realizes his life has ended and he's still alive we all have choices in life we all have the ability to think before we act unresolved issues and uncontrollable inner rage puts us all at risk of a life or death sentence obviously he's guilty and will be dealt with according to the law he's a aspiring rapper he wanted the fame well Mr. Brooks every body knows your name

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Apostle says:

"it's something sorrowful about a man who realizes his life has ended and he's still alive" Boom!!

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