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Loves Away, Love

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Closeted spirit, I use to  fear it,

Closing doors,  denying  belief

Relief came  in  grief,  no  longer  denying

Existing on  fathoms  reached, upon retreat

No deceit, from my creeps,  ethereal beseeched

I reached  for  love,  no longer loving a  past

Went past, by-passed  familiarity,  known face in peculiarity

Not quite easy,  I be  easy,  recalling  how  easy it was to please me

She moved on in countenance, respect  for  her stance of sustenance

My consequence was but  a  comeuppance, to  recompense, love  suspense

Not knowing how  to  respond,  living  out  expectations,  great  and dismal

Mesmerized epistle, volition was but  a  face  worn  from constant contemplation

Yet hearts’ speak  in  codes,  easy  to  decipher,  if  the  ego  implodes

On such bended knee,  my stance  in our  romance,  is  exposed

I still survive her  turn away,  for  the  life  of  me,  I  still  can’t quite  shake

A heart’s call to  reconsider,  the  turbulence  of  a  love  long  lost, on account of its wake!

 She remains a mystery in  the  enigma  that is  awoken,  but  to  me  her  love will always be devotion!

 

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mlowe5 says:

Deeply beautifully. I love the rhythmic rhyming flow and its dynamics from beginning to end. A profound last stanza. Thanks for the share, 2b2b2. U B blessed. Peace and Love.

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mrmelody7 says:

Blitzing the romance Any Lady would b blushing proud if this poem was written for or to her
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks muck mlowe, this one flowed from a wound long since closed, but still felt, depending on the weather! ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Thank you mrmeldoy7....I aims to please, at least I once did, nowadays peace of mind is good enough for me....ONE

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