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It was right there

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It was right there
I know it I saw it with
my own eyes
crossed up
disengaged, but there
right on the verge of
sleep and awake
but not awake
I'm still dreaming
but I saw it 
It was right there
I grasped with my mind
the consequences of
seeing and not seeing
what was right before my eyes.
Patricia R. 12/16/2022

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Such is the shinning light of His revealing light! ONE. Peace and Love.
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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Such is the shinning light of His revealing light! ONE. Peace and Love.
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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Such is the shining light of His revealing light! ONE. Peace and Love.

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