The Immortal Wize
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I sat in class and wrote
"I hate the teacher"
"on a sheet of paper"
the teacher read it
she got mad at me
sent me home with a
note pinned to me
that note got me in
a heap of trouble
the time I wrote
"I hate the teacher"
"on a sheet of paper"
unbeknown to me
"I had written poetry"
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mrmelody7 says: Good one so the journey began I remember in the Army I wrote on a box I hate the Army was in AIT training U know they didnt like that |
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mrmelody7 says: BTW when I filed for PTSD claim a friend told me Joe you gonna get that cause you documented had a Bronze Star certificate tellin why I got it |
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mlowe5 says: Some 50 years ago, I wrote "...the one damn thing I won't do when I get my degree, is to teach..." Now 50 years later---after 3 retirements---I'm still part-time in the classroom engaged in a labor of love. Great write. Thanks. Peace and Love (M. Lowe) |
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Concrete StepsI sit around and I think about how past rejections turned out to be a blessing and how long it took me to learn one life lesson woke up to find a few strands of gray don't recall passing yesterday do I have regrets of course I do if you made my mistakes you would too the light comes on after birth like life goes on after death I gasp to grasp then I sigh did I really pass the past up I never could imagine what the future would hold I heard segregation is on the rise I wonder what that would look like in 2025 actually the thought tickles me the astrological belief is we're in retrograde |
Tulaa place where people go sometimes there they die a child is born spirit enters then the baby cries a brief encounter with a angel on a elevator ride heard a prophetic word long before its time |
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Wrap Around (03052025)one upon a line of time I was glad it was Friday couldn't wait to see Saturday slept in on Sunday to be well rested for Monday |
Anesthesia (03072025)she left before she was old enough to be tired of living she wasn't ready to go to sleep she opened her eyes for the first time not too long ago I want to know do we cry or do our eyes bleed over crime scenes politicians playing tiny violins doing nothing to stop the violence blaming the parents it takes a village a whole island a hour for a moment of silence we see the change we made the shift it's hard to avoid the shape of things when it's difficult to escape on a plane we take the train it all hurt the same only the feeling change once one decide to feel no more pain |
Do We (0342025)do we da do we do we da do we do we da do we da do we aye we da we do aye we da we do aye we da we da we do |
Situation Unfoldingit ain't a bucket of popcorn big enough for all this drama truth is I don't care much for popcorn and drama isn't on my top list of priorities the majorities hung up on all this propaganda Luigi paraded around like he shot Kennedy and the CEO was the president in the words of the white baby in the car seat bullsh** bring me bad news but miss me with thebullsh** I been to the zoo it ain't no fun getting hit with slung sh** it's just as disappointing as stepping in it most people don't read and it is evident that they don't do math either because sh** don't be adding up when ever you hear the words world stage you're being told it's a play in a metaphoric way truth is some of us don't believe anymore truth is we not supposed to continue to go for the okey doke the curtains are open wide enough to see what's going on behind the scenes if we forget the bullsh** that happened we won't believe the bullsh** that's happening |
