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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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don't stop the music turn the loop on I wanna listen to the beat over and over again to no end I intend to ascend to another dimension open the portal let me in it's not a gun it's a pen will it shoot it depends my art I'll defend like my heart I'll defend to the fullest extent height length depth breadth too hyp to can't catch a breath too many close relations met their death still bereaved over them pouring out some cognac the rest is going in a glass here's a toast to the past it's all off the brain I'm off the chain can't stop the train no rest till drained refill and come back again like a boomerang thunder lighting make it rain go outside in the flood catch the wave to the shore take a shot score grab the points out the door caution slippery floor I just poured out some more for the here no more the ones seen no more heard no more fought a battle in a senseless war cried so much the heart don't hurt no more don't stop the beat it speaks to me can't talk while listening intensely standing on every word it lifts me spiritually the energys wavy oozy woozy hazy too much oomph to be lazy fully equipped wordsmith drop it off pick it up like a uber lyft bed and breakfast in a airbnb don't know when to quit it flows like liquid can't turn off the facet the rhymes keep on coming like time keep on ticking bout to wrap it up the stings getting long enough I think it's enough rope to climb up but can't put the rhyme up times not up the beat go boom the flow say zoom the pen glides across the pad nearing a breakoff point don't want the situation to get critical could've stopped in the middle give em just a little to digest did I just digress stop the music I need to rest in order to be the best go getter

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LP45 says:

Mic dropped! Enuf said!
 

Ms.PoeticPassion says:

@LP45....I agree.....!

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