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People, Places, Thangs

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life

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poem 
tucked neatly
discretely
underneath three upside down walnut shells
people
places
thangs
carnival sounds and
tasty Caribbean ware
colorful 
festive costumes surround us as you contemplate
if it is about you
while you watch me shifting
slow
then accelerated
be patient
in a minute I will give you the chance to
overturn one 
was it about you
somewhere with you
something we did
somewhere over the rainbow
far, far away
making me incapable of sleep last night
until it found its way on my note pad
and underneath one of these empty walnut shells
A game of chance
And even if you pick the right one
I’m not obligated to tell you the truth
writers of poems 
Have that inalienable right
So
Try it on if you think it fits 
And wear your poem proudly
If it does

 

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Contest Winner  

mlowe5 says:

Indeed, if it fits, wear it well and be proud. ONE. Peace and Love.
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2b2b2 says:

Superb Work....Bravo...thanks for sharing....ONE

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