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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Hanging By A Thread

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back the day we would watch Bruce Lee movies Kung Fu and Chinese matinee on Saturday spill on to the street looking for someone to kick and chop a child plays shoot em up bang bang games every day and no one thinks that one day will come when they pick up a gun and shoot someone we can watch something long enough that we believe we can do it we actually think we can do it and chances are we will do it because it looks easy to do we took our medicine we took our punishment and all the beatings our parents administered fast forward back a child in a corner and that child will arm his or her self for war "save the child" I think it's too late according to Jeremiah 4:22 we go for what we know adults are killing children at alarming rates what on earth would make us think a child feels safe "coming to the stage extinction of innocence a new world order the parent is thrown under the bus and the child is put behind the wheel he's 6 years old he shot his teacher in school are we listening yet do we see what's happening to us have we begin to stand up and take notice yet two children dead after being shot by a man in Mississippi where is the safety for these babies these are endless stories told daily rewind we watched Gunsmoke but didn't pick up a gun and go smoke someone it's out of control we're powerless over this animal it's out of hand headed head first down the devils slide it's all synchronized publicity like it's meant to be feels like the rapture already came and we're the ones left behind believing we're the one's who survived it's all a great big lie the truth nowhere in sight the longer we stay we gone have to fight a war we never fought before woke or sleep we in too deep it's too much to sweep underneath the rug the dark side is life support is unlikely the light side is we know what we're up against we can't give up as long as there's life in us we can't pull the plug we must sink our heels in learn how to breathe again it's a critical life or death matter we're in

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2b2b2 says:

So true, sadly so true my friend, folks be feeling it, that is why folks be out here wild....reminds of that super collider experiment they set up to see if they can create something...by speeding up atoms to crash into other atoms....yeah and them supposed to be the smart ones...sounds and seems like a bad experiment that has been gone wrong....Stay Safe Fam....ONE LOVE!!

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