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The Immortal Wize

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Raised From Memory

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I can't tell the river from the ocean

 all I know is it's a lot of water 

in the sea I know a house it sits 

on pillars cause it's a lot of water

 underneath when burying a 

body don't dig the hole too deep

 you might wake the sleep I been 

to the house only once a long 

time ago the place was full of

smiling people and the nicest 

folks you ever want to meet 

all the neighbors spoke and 

everybody claim to be kin to

me I had a great auntie who 

was blind she had a gun 

shots rang out every time 

she shot at a rat she killed 

a mouse I miss those 

homemade biscuits and 

Crawfish bisque now it's all

water under the bridge 

literally it washed away still 

I can paint the picture clear

like a movie on a screen 

enough for you to see

the house in New Orleans


 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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mlowe5 says:

Nice! My Queen---your home girl---has me to say to you, "...now you know what it is that you have to do, to inspire those who are following behind you." Continue to canvas the inspiring word. One. Peace and Love.

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