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Turning with the tides

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Picture us

archeologists on a new dig

With the latest-greatest

top of the line tools

 

Taking readings

of a long forgotten culture

with a language thats been lost or obscured

In attempt to align our minds

with people lost in time

Taking data/messages etched into the pyramids

To complete a sketch of a distant reality

For what it is

was

sought

trying to be bought

 

A vision in a dream

a monument to greatness

Thoughtfully prescribed…

A place to pause for us to wonder

An interrupted song in the minds of ancients

A time ship sent towards the heavens

To catch the outgoing tide

To drift into the universe among the stars

Led by what was described as gods

Beyond the limits of man now or then…

 

or maybe not

Whether it was graffiti

a recipe

a biblical incantation

A blind date with eternity  

Or proclamations of a kingdom ordained

To come into being…

 

this world or the next

Reading between the lines we find ourselves

Trying to read the minds of scribes,

scholars, servants

or a people far ahead

of their time

Tweaking the sun dials...

 

For the cues

Searching ancient wisdom for a date

Matching theoretical postulation

Fitting pieces of a puzzle

Telling a story…

 

Or are we

just trying to pay our dues

Recognizing ancestors who knew something better

Perhaps even things we think we do

Or is it more closely fit to portray a mosaic

Of a journey up/down the river Euphrates/Nile

Testing our skills to more accurately trying hard

To get the soft parts right…

 

Or are we merely inserting our marks

Adding our part to the messages

Going further down the line

Our most current best guess

Of a day in time

One of many waves of civilization

A future-prehistoric artists with scientific tools

Trying once again…

 

to match reason to rhyme

 To interpolate a smile/frown into computer files

Pictures to the text...

 

Taking another look

To compare the message

with a new translation

For an uncertain audience,

Trusting to uncertain interpretations

Osmosis through a permeable mindset

Hoping our spiritual voices coincide

Ideas…

 

lost

between our minds

C2

 

 

 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, an excellent write, C2. Having acted upon what was passed on to us by our Ancestors, we now pass on the nature of the actions' awareness to be acted upon b by those in the coming tides. ONE. Peace and Love.

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Charles2 says:

Thank you love_supreme. Work in progress!

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Charles2 says:

mlowe5 Appreciate the benefit of your vision and wisdom

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