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An Elegy of a Dead Relationship

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NOTE: My First Elegy. Is it Good, Bad or does it need work???

 

I mourn the loss of

 this Relationships demise,

With a Heavy Heart, 

and with Tears in my eyes.

 

We tried to make it work,

 but in the end we failed,

Our trying wasn't good enough, 

our parting ways prevailed. 

 

A lasting relationship that 

has come to its ending,

Dead to the world,

 The decomposing is beginning.

 

Let us not waste time,

 if we know what is best,

 put this relationship

 in the ground for it eternal rest.

 

Earth to earth, Ashes to ashes,

and Dust to dust,

this Relationship is expired,

 There is no more us.

 

B.R.

Date: 05/10/2023

 

 

 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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mlowe5 says:

Well crafted. Took me back to the scriptures that remind us that grief (the child of love) may last for the night, but joy comes in the morning. We must also be aware that the pain love may cause at times, is also healed by love. Such is the nature of its own healing and resurrection. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
 

TEEDUB815 says:

Nice Write. Peace And Blessings
 

Belindathapoet says:

Thank you both for your Encouraging words @ mlowe5, and TEEDUB 815!!!!

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