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if the furious flames of the sun were to fail, i would not be alarmed, as you light up my darkest days

how bright your smile shines is sure to strike the stars with envy, 

since they cannot compare to such beauty

the way you show affection fills the depths of my lungs with fresh air and my tainted heart with love

You remind me of the sea, extraordinary, and lively. yet so deep and filled of mystery, you put the mind of others to ease with your enticing view.

if i could plant seeds with the amount of love for you that i hold in my heart

the earth shall be replenished with breathtaking evergreens, representing my eternal feelings for you, also adding color to many bland lives, as you did to mine.

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love_supreme says:

Ok, very nice!

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mlowe5 says:

Tributed Lover. Nice! Peace and Love.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Very nice indeed.

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Ms.PoeticPassion says:

Awwwww......this is a nice write

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