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And...he wants to be free

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And....he wants to be free

this man's inside the mind of the mirror, and he wants to be free...

Clearly shaken by his circumstances needing no more pain

time isn't being withheld from the gaps. He feels so safe at times

tho' the unbending mirror reflects its nature unshaken in it own pane.

In his daily walk his steps are chosen so very carefully

as guilt chooses him responsible for cracks in the sidewalk,

a murderer of crows by sight, of bugs to ants to roaches stepped upon.

Like a mole he then retreats inside of the mirror in solitary defeat.

His physical address is being yet again tested, measured, evaluated.

Knowing he is physically here only by a spiritual promise to forever be,

the belief in an only begotten son is required, and also commanded. Only then shall the breakfast of unashamed, guiltless, and fearless be eaten.

Feeling full of energy he drags self around the mirror to social events

and partake in pride, laughter, with an overwhelming curious challenge

settling in the end for the good ole boy pats upon the back for spending.

Never really in tune with clear physical pain that brought him social gain and

wild thoughts, yet unequipped to handle an hour of toting others gladness.

Now the physical pain and the social gain rode the horse of finances

longitudinal and latitudinal offset, yet very much along a parallel sect

engaging in a evaluation of a devalued account, being basically broke

because even the earned cash flow could not crack the mirrors pane.

This man's inside the mind of the mirror and needing to be free....

What happens now in the mental capacity or faculty of this man's mind?

He himself is unbroken, unmeasured, stable, and the lot, and knows it.

He sees self freer than at first thought, and wants complete wholeness

as he wraps self inside of the beaten begotten savior we call Jesus the

Christ! The physical pain of faith held him through plaques and pats on

the back, now comforted by painless eternal freedom...

--BlakMista--

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mlowe5 says:

Nice! Love is of Christ. And love always heals its own pain with forgiving Love. With "painless eternal freedom", look into the mirror and see, the same renewed beauty looking back at thee. ONE. Peace and Love.
 

love_supreme says:

Always good to see this poet on the Vibe! Excellent write.

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