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LuisTala7
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first love

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 Since the first time that I saw you, I knew that it was right

Everything you made me feel, it was love at first sight. 

I don't know what it is, your pretty lips your gorgeous eyes,

But whenever I'm with you, it seems like time flies. 

I'm not trying to sound cheesy, I'm not trying to sound desperate, 

But out of all the other ladies, you're my one and only favorite. 

You're the light in my sky, forget about the sun,

Forget about the rest, you're my one and only one. 

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cbrian2007 says:

This is decent. I like it.

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Luistala7 says:

Haha thanks man it's a little something I had written a while back.

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Belindathapoet says:

Awesome!

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