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Impossible

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romance

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 Like the sky without its stars

Like a battle without its scars
 
You left my life dysfunctional, you made my world go flat,
You took the essence from my body, stepped on me like a mat. 
 
Like a jungle with no vegetation
Like a life with no limitation 
 
You stripped me of my will, made me fall under your command,
Made my life feel so still, made me long just for your hand. 
 
Like a person with no heart
Like an end without a start 
 
Seems like a story from fiction, but just look at me now, 
Look at me and my depiction, I'm a reflection of the how. 
 
Like music without its notes
Like quoting what has no quotes
 
Seems highly non-possible, yet I don't  cease to exist,
Seems likely quite plausible, that in your life I'm but a mist. 
 
 
 
 
 

 

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love_supreme says:

This is a very nice poem.

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Belindathapoet says:

A very powerful, expressable poem Good Job!

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