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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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What’s my irrational?

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Do I care too much about what other people think?

Perhaps, I try to do and say too much, kitchen sink?

Or maybe I’m too nice and cave in too often?

Does the stress that I try to avoid, delay my inevitable coffin?

The things that I see so clearly in others as shortcomings or mistakes 

Why can’t I as easily identify as my own mirror breaks?

Maybe it is much easier to judge from a far, one who tries and fails

Then to realize that we’re all doomed, because fate always prevails

So if those you hold most dear fail you time and again 

Please realize, that even without knowing, you do the same too, dear friend!

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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mlowe5 says:

An awareness write! ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.
 

Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Nice write

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Warriorcarryingwater says:

Thanks love_supreme, mlowe5 and Breadcrumbs2021!

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