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Snatched

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life

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Brown buckle shoes
and bobby socks
She’s holding my hand
and I am squirming
then in a second I’m
breaking free from
the warmth of the
safest place I’ve
known
I dart away
for seconds
an I am snatched
back into the
comfort of the
one who
loves
me.


 

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mlowe5 says:

Wow! Snatched back to where you must go, as opposed to where you thought you "litterly" ought to go! Such profound awareness. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Thank You mlowe5 Peace

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TEEDUB815 says:

Back in the day moves. Nice!
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mlowe5 says:

ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.
 

Mingoao says:

I like this - Good job. -Peace

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write

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