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My feelings and I

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romance

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 I'm sitting here all alone, 

every ten minutes I check my phone, I'm waiting for a sign from you, 
a sign that says you miss me too. Cuz ever since you left my side 
I've lost my hope, I've lost my pride.  You were the one who kept me sane, you were the one who healed my pain. But now... 
Time just keeps going by, 
my body feels so weak, my eyes wanna cry. 
Every little thing reminds me of you, how you used to be, and what you used to do. 
You're stuck to my heart, like bark to tree, 
without you in my life, girl I'm just not me. 
I hope you understand what I'm trying to say, 
in love with you my lady, forever I will stay. 
I'm sitting with my feelings, while my whole worlds blue, 
though there's many other ladies... there's just one you. 
I wake up in the morning, seeing you my one desire, 
you're the only one I want, baby girl I'm your admirer. 
You're still etched on my mind, no lie, 24/7, 
you're my lady, you're my princess, you're my angel straight from heaven. 
And trust me... 
No one compares to you your beauty, it's so hard not to remember how you used to be my cutie. 
As I reminisce, those precious moments hand in hand, 
I see you slipping through my fingers, though your body's not of  sand. 
And I wonder, where could I have gone wrong, 
Truth is I miss you, you're the one for whom I long. 

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jnikic5 says:

i really like this one..its one of those where i can feel everything ur saying as i read it

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Luistala7 says:

Thanks, I still have lots to learn though but you gotta start somewhere right?!

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