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The Immortal Wize

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What you say I couldn’t do I’m getting it done
With no help from you son
I stay on the grind all the time Taking care of what’s mine
Haters always on my back across the track
I'm constantly looking back
Their trying to cut me off so I won’t make it back

Remember when I got jacked
For my sidekick my ring and my chain
You were there you saw everything
You ran and got shot in the but
That’s what you get because I know it was you who set me up

Where you said I couldn’t go
I went there yesterday going back today
If I can’t get through I’m gone take the other way
If you stand in my way like a tornado
I’m gone blow right through you
What you said I would not amount to
Been there done that too and gone do more
You low down dirty rat bastard you


You thought I went away now turn around “HEY”
How you doing is it me that you’re perusing?
Like a crab trying to pull me down
Before I let you I’ll beat you down
You laughed in my face look at you now
Looking foolish like a clown
Isn’t that just a smile turned upside down?


My beef goes pound for pound
My intellect will knock you down stand you up on your feet
Then knock you back down then repeat
You saw me fall and didn’t help me up
Now you’re down and can’t get back up
Life at the bottom must be rough
I wish you the best of luck
Who am I kidding I don’t really give a F_ck


You go around knocking people down now you stumble
That’s the way the cookie crumbles
Now pick your jaw up off the floor
I’m not through I’m about to hit you with some more
Don’t Eva, Eva, Eva Eva, step to me anymore

You tell everything you know
That’s why the seeds you plant don’t grow
The grass in your yard don’t turn green
You’re so ugly you should be heard and not seen
Walking around in that tightskirt
On your fatthat sh*t must hurt

You talk about others but you don’t have any room
When I peek into your window all I see is gloom
You always popping off but who asked you?
You need to clean your house and yourtoo
Walking around like your sh*t don’t smell
You’re so foil not even your pucci will sale
Yeah I said it don’t get mad I’m for real
Your sh*t smells bad


You talked about my mama but that’s ok
The sh*t you said was true anyway
Now for the disrespect you must pay
Where is yo mama anyway?
Oh yeah I saw her sucking d*ck the other day


I understand you’re in a lot of pain
Do you have to cause other people the same?
Misery is your name causing problems is your game
That sh*t you talk can’t walk its lame
That’s why I’m ripping you a new one causing you shame

You will never get the best of me
My eyes are open even when I’m sleep
I wake up before sunrise and wipe the Sleep from my eyes
Hit my knees and touch the sky
Come out come out from where ever you are
Look at me now I’m the star

Watch me glitter
Watch me shine
Watch me leave yourbehind


You always bragged about having more
I saved my money now I own the store
About to make and save some more
Now bite my apple to the core
Everything you got is rent to own
You're paying for it with payday loans
You’re in debt up to your ears
now you’re crying crocodile tears
 
 

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love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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The Immortal Wize says:

thank You!

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DAPHNE says:

I really liked this one Wize...it was real talk and I laughed @ dirty rat bastard you.... THATS AN ORIGINAL WIZE! :-)

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scash102 says:

This was Hot and funny lol..

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