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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Gravitron

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Have you ever been on that on carnival ride?

As the Gravitron spins, up and down 45 panels slide

Three times the force gravity to be exact

Pined to the wall, stuck flat on your back!

Earth spins at 1,000 mph, but this ride is only 24 revolutions per minute!

But it feels so much faster, whenever you’re trapped up in it!

At first it seems fun, until it feels like a cage

Like finding yourself stuck in the same routine for over four thousand days!

Regretting your choices, as you spin and slide

It’s only supposed to be an 80 second fairgrounds ride!

When you manage to look and listen, beyond the lights and the sounds

The ‘Carny’ who started your ride is nowhere to be found!

Why did you paid and willingly enter this sadistic merry-go-round?

You peek down, and notice that your feet ain’t even touching the ground!

Ralph and Chuck are blowing chunks, you can tell by the smell

Hold your breath and pray, this might just be he!! 

 

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mlowe5 says:

A reflective "ride" of life and the prices we pay in it. A nice allegorical write. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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