would you hold the ladder steady for me to climb to the top if I promise to reach down and pull you up would you trust me enough would you help me up if I promise to do the same for you knowing if I break a promise to you I break something inside of you once broken can never be fixed would you take the risk when it's evident it's something broken inside of me impossible to fix could you handle the suspense the unpredicted double stranded plot twist sitting on the edge of the seat breathless stranded in a remote location no bars 2% battery life on the device waiting for a stranger to return with a gas can give you a hand what would that feel like the thought fearful the reality tearful the stranger could be the Roadside Strangler fixing your flat putting air in your tires now you're in danger would you hold the ladder for me to climb to the top I can't promise I'll return the same
The Immortal Wize
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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize
Shirley Up The Blockthere was a woman name Shirley who lived up the block so she was Shirley up the block Shirley up the block knew everybody's business and everything thing that happened on the block if you wanted to know what happened find Shirley up the block she'll tell you who done it and why who shot who and where Shirley up the block got beat into a coma no one knew who done it and why  |
From The StartI see the time when I stood in a circle hoping to be picked to play on a team I can see when I was the last one standing and the last one to pick had no choice but to choose me I could see how that made me feel I could see me being the best player on the field catching the ball putting it in the net running touchdowns hitting home runs I could see me MVP I could see me in VIP I could see me graduating Magna Cum Laude I could see me being life of the party I could see it from a far |
Tune Uplistening to a song I want to hear thinking about the time I first heard it on the radio a time when I could tune in to any station I wanted to but had no choice over the song the DJ played waiting patiently to listen to the song I wanted to hear fast forward through the years now I can type in words on the computer hey Google or ask Alexa to play any song I want to hear the creative power to tune out all the things I don't want to listen to and tune into the things I do "Keeps My Head to to the sky" |
Ignition Completewhy do this enemy want to be my enemy what is this enemy interest in me why is this enemy drawn to me why do this enemy follow my light how long do we play Cat and Mouse Cops and Robbers Cowboys and Indians is this enemy a foe from a past life do this enemy want to fight me is this enemy planning to take a life what did I do to create this enemy what did I do to I attract this type of energy to me I don't know this enemy personally this enemy is pressure it cost a lot to be stress free I guess we always been enemies every body can't be a allie somebody gotta be aversive in the who done it and how come |
Stop Itstop trying to make it perfect stop trying to get it right stop trying to straighten it up stop trying to fix it you done enough |
You Knowyou know what this is you know how you know what this is you know what this is because it's a feeling you felt before no one can tell you it's not that when you know it is you never forget a feeling no matter how long ago you felt it a feeling can't change the way it feel you know what this is don't you |
Thatyou know what this is you know how you know what this is you know what this is because it's a feeling you felt before no one can tell you it's not that when you know it is you never forget a feeling no matter how long ago you felt it a feeling can't change the way it feel you feel what this is don't you |
Be Youit's not that that don't like you as much it's they not looking like you they don't have nothing in common with you and you don't have nothing in common with them you different be different stay different don't change a thing about you it's not that they don't like you as much as it's they not like you you don't need to be alike "be you" |
Leaveyou didn't get on the plane you didn't board the train you missed the bus the ship sailed without you those awaiting your arrival knew you were running late but still thought you were on the way so they continued to wait but you changed your mind and decided to stay and wait on those who you thought needed you more than those waiting for you to arrive you were going somewhere but decided not to after you been used you decide to leave but when you arrive you'll find yourself alone those who patiently wait will not wait for long those who hold you back will always stab you in the back every chance is a chance to live a better life don't keep others waiting for you to decide to leave those who don't want to see you go "GO" |
Modea simple mind can figure out complex things and not forget all the details a complex mind can complicate things bring down the plane derail the train and scramble a egg inside its shell in the tale the scarecrow was simple minded if he only had brain a simple mind is defined foolish feeble and artless like "an artless literary masterpiece" can be the mastery of a mastermind a simple mind will fool you every time a complex mindset is set on predictability |