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My Letter to You(myself)

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I have a couple things to say to you
Things that may seem bizarre
Things that will probably hurt your feelings
But it’s for the best
I think you should know
I love you
See it seems like the idea of love is so vile to you
That love from yourself is unaccepted
As if to say you are a fool
As if to say attending school
is having nothing for yourself
You’re ungrateful
But yes see bad things happened to you
I understand
But you should of known
Putting your trust in a mortal man
you’ve deemed yourself helpless
Yes your kindness was taken for weakness
But no good deed goes unpunished
Bring out your better self
and let me love you
Understand this
I’ve never gotten a love letter
And if I did it probably won’t have enough words
to heal this heart
Sometimes we think that if it’s “to good” it’s no good
We misunderstand
If they say they love you they probably mean it
They probably dreamed it
Dreamed of a girl as stunning as you being theirs
So im writing this to say I Love You
And it’s ok to shed tears
N.G © 2013
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The Immortal Wize says:

If they say they love you they probably mean it They probably dreamed it ..this line stands out demanding to be seen, so profound it begs to be re-titled :) Awesome play with words.
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chispoken says:

"So I'm writing this to say I love you and it's okay to shed tears". To many people are in this no feelings type of stage especially the young men, but it's great to know that through this beautiful scribe someone has understood that love is not a three-way street and you can't enjoy true love until you love yourself. I should know. Great work

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