to those who were there to celebrate my life and I celebrated theirs we all had a good time it was a good night then we all went home and we all went to sleep some of us woke up some of us stayed sleep some of us remembered some of us forgot about the time we all got together I can still see taste smell and feel the moment we all started to drift apart and go our separate ways I remember all that because I wrote it all down Play by play frame by frame if I threw the party I know the name of everyone who came the one's who were there to peep out the scene the ones who came with a gift and the ones who came empty handed you're all on the list because I never forgot you you and you
The Immortal Wize
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But If & MaybeI wrote a note to let you know I wrote a note to let you know something I think you should know I thought you should know I wrote a note to tell you something you should know I wrote it in a note I forgot to give you the note I wrote to tell you something you gotta know  |
Guest Bookto those who were there to celebrate my life and I celebrated theirs we all had a good time it was a good night then we all went home and we all went to sleep some of us woke up some of us stayed sleep some of us remembered some of us forgot about the time we all got together I can still see taste smell and feel the moment we all started to drift apart and go our separate ways I remember all that because I wrote it all down Play by play frame by frame if I threw the party I know the name of everyone who came the one's who were there to peep out the scene the ones who came with a gift and the ones who came empty handed you're all on the list because I never forgot you you and you |
Green Screenif it cannot be touched it cannot be held if it cannot be held it is not capable of being handled if it cannot be handled it is not tangible perceptible ponderable nor sensible if it is not material it is not visible it must be solid it must be concrete to be noticable otherwise it is not substantial real actual nor physical believing something without proof or substantial evidence is credulous belief the stage is set for audience's who are ripe for the picking born yesterday green as grass easily taken in by the performance |
I Knead To Knowthe price of bread got me blown a month old loaf got me baffled wondering where's the mold |
Bountifulas November approaches the day we say happy Thanksgiving is upon us we've been told the tale heard several stories about what the day is about most of us look forward to all the food we should always be thankful for having plenty of food how can we survive without it but when you really think about it a whole family gathered together should be thankful for having each other |
Roundaboutgetting over it is right round the corner careful not to take the wrong turn make the wrong move get lost on the path going through the pass drift off swerve into the past bump into who I once knew stutter to utter the words "what's new" attempting to remove enough tension out the way to escape further uncomfortable conversation |
Dip Outdipped a whole chip in the thick dip came up with half of a chip the other half still in the dip solution thin the dip or thicker chip a stab in the dark unforeseen situation hiding behind the door on the second floor same old thing same old stuff same old month old bread no mold to indicate it's too old to consume poisons not a placebo a diet of speculation is lack of education hear say is unhealthy for the well being stand clear |
A While Backclock on the wall can you tell me how much time I got of course not don't want to be late need to be on time travel back a few steps erase and add a few lines then todo that often sometimes my new moto is no love no love it's a non lethal intentional subliminal like what the law is to a criminal slowing down in the middle of a rush to figure out which way to go freestyle awhile then continue to flow umpteen watches in my possession a collection of time I can't keep looking out the window at the same tree wondering if the tree see me staring into space the look on face says it all don't have to open my mouth to explain the telepathic thought sounds like a plain in flight reaching great height |
Kaboomif I fold a sheet of paper into a sharp point and poke someone's eye out the point is defining things limits it's use and ability |
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