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Caribbean Jones

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damn
this was an easy poem to write

just looking into your eyes seeing sparkling
dancing
cool white foam waterfalls and crystal-clear ocean waters
my toes
sinking deeper into the soft sand of your shores

yeah
this poem was no trouble at all

watching two white hot bolts of lightning
dangerously flashing within above your Caribbean skies
parallel
dancing for a while
never once intersecting causing continuous claps of thunder
Greek gods
making mythological love in the heavens above us
and the worlds rejoicing in their union

I know your name ain’t
Jones
just happened to see the name
Jones
sitting all by its damned self

an island surrounded by cool coral waters
schools of tropical fish in military formation
palm trees swaying
orchards bursting
full of all kinds of island fruits
ripe
and delicate to the touch

a late afternoon storm arrives bringing dark clouds
the rain finds me in your arms
as you whisper soft words in my ear in a language I do not understand
with institutional understanding
and then we make slow reggae love
while the rain pounds against our rooftops
hearts pounding
frantic pounding
strings of a reggae bass guitar
and the words to this poem swelling up within me
climaxing on to this page

two rays of lightning dancing perilously close
parallel
yet never intersecting
causing that one continuous clap of thunder
Greek gods
making mythological love in the heavens above us
and the worlds rejoicing in their union

damn
this was easy

always easy when the Jones come down
the Caribbean Jones

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COMMENTS

 

love_supreme says:

Wow, this is nice.Excellent write.
 

Bragee says:

great visuals in this poem!
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The Immortal Wize says:

A master at work.

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