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Time to get out
I’m in too deep

I hear footsteps in my sleep
I roll out the bed light on my feet
Throughout my dwelling place I creep
I know somebody’s watching me

Are they peeking through my window ?
Are they on my rooftop?
Are they hiding in a tree?
Are they inside of my TV?

How many pictures have been taken of me that I did not pose for?
How many sets of keys have been made to my door?

The phone number given to me
who had it before?

Why is it unsettling when someone knocks on my door?

⿿I⿿M DISTURBED⿝

Babies today are no longer born with their fist clutched tight
Their too lax they did not come for the struggle they came for the night

They did not come for the fight
Video games are more inviting

They rebel against reading and writing
Generation X came to X us out

They came to declare that we know not what we talk about
Most think they just evolved

Many can’t comprehend an unseen GOD
They move like programmed robots
They act strange and odd

These are not bad kids
Just a bunch of dead heads

My niece claims to be an Emo a group of kids lost
With nowhere to go

She looks more like Elmo in a puppet show

Beetle juice “LET MY PEOPLE GO”

She laughs and cries a lot there is no in between

I have tried to tell her that I feel her pain
But she won’t let me into her twisted brain

just kids who know not what they do

Unaware that life has a foot and wears a big shoe
She’s entertained by those who squeal like pigs

Her favorite song is pain by THREE DAYS GRACE

That causes one to feel pain, agony and sorrow
And other dark emotional feelings

If you ask me these kids done flipped their wigs
A parentless generation of depressed adolescents

She dresses in black her hair looks shellacked
She looks like a junkie with a monkey on her back

Her arms look like she was scratched by a cat
but she doesn’t have a cat


Her conversation is strange

She likes being alone

Her room is her thunder dome

She tells me that she does not care about nothing

I tell her that her movement result to nothing
There is no cause to believe as she does

Bottled up inside and contemplating suicide

The truth is this girl is not crazy
Just misinformed and lazy

Glued to her PC playing Sims 3
She believes that if she slits her wrist or OD’s
That she will be free if she no longer breathes

Out of captivity where will we go
If our Moses is emotional ?

“SHES JUST GOING THROUGH A PHASE”
Parents in a daze

Just a teen who’s trying to cope

I can only hope I don’t find her hanging from ROPE

Did not he warn us and tell us so?


2009 © WIZE DOM
2008 © WIZE DOM

 

 

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TINY says:

I was once your niece in many different forms so this poem i can honestly relate to in more way than 1. this piece does speak the truth.

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