you open your eyes during surgery you don't see the surgeon
you don't see the
nurse you don't know
why you hurt you
don't see the incision
you open the medicine
cabinet you reach for the bottle of aspirin
you don't know you took two placebos
you don't know if its
enough to do the job
you don't know you being worked on then suddenly the pain you felt is gone you don't
know the medicine
you took is not that
strong you don't know
how many times you
been under the knife
you don't know how
many times the unseen surgeon had to
close your eyes open you up reach inside and save your life
you don't know you
a sinner under a halo
The Immortal Wize
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A Pill To Swallow (0232025)
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