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The Immortal Wize
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mrmelody7 says: Agree with this I often think that myself that everyone is a robot Cant post on none of these browser get the 403 forbidden Still now and then go to couple poetry sites If I do try to post on this browser poem just disapper have a good one |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support, I too sometimes get 503 |
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The Immortal Wize says: mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support. My last reply was much longer but most of it was cut off it's some spooky stuff going on man, "eyes emoji" |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Wize I agree with your last reply somethin spooky goin on I go with the flow I dont have hang ups about it I just go somewhere Only recently able to pull this up on Chrome but still wont post Thanks a lot maybe its TRUMPITUS |
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The Immortal Wize says: Lol! It's damn sure something floating in the water. I wrote you damnly a whole paragraph but it all wouldn't post, I hope this goes through. I believe it's the same issue Mr. Lowe encountered wish I could help but I'm only the mayor I have no chair. Lol! |
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mrmelody7 says: Oh yeah I hear U yeah its the same as Mr Lowe happen some years ago too I did nothin then one day it just started back posting OK Mayor but unlike the Vibe staff U do reply back or say somethin |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 The admin has been very helpful and responsive in the past but things do happen I'm not sure what that is but it is unusual. |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize
Self Kept (03272026)I stopped asking stopped needing |
I Know (03272026)Faith is I Know That I know That I Know That I Know That is what Faith is |
On The Dot (03262026)
It's good and bad in everything looking at it through both eyes otherwise all you see is the light
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Misplaced Where No One Looks (03262026)I was writing poems in places no one looks for poetry mistaking silence for rejection I wrote poetry where no one came to feel I titled it Failure it wasn’t failure nothing was wrong with the words that were heard by no one no one who needed a poem I called it Failure I was wrong
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The E Factor (03262026)stop asking questions search no more for answers refrain from the need for explanation that is evolution
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The Walker (03262026)It's gonna hurt to leave it's gonna be hard to say goodbye There’s a place I go I don’t talk about it's down the road somewhere out there it’s calm and still it knows my name, like it knows my will the hands on the clock is stuck somewhere in the past something in the present didn't let me pass it made me stay in school after class during the shift it's like the lever broke off in my hand and cut through my flesh like a shard of glass standing on the dock the ship already passed talking to the clock "I'll never trust time again chatting with the stars I know the stars are friends trees are green sky is blue really is that the truth the feelings too loud can't describe the sound |
3,964 Echoes (03252026)some were born in silence others in screams I did not know how to name them all Each one cried a fragment of tears a mark left behind I would not forget that I survived myself the number stands before me Not as a goal yet to meet but as a closing of a circle a dot in the middle a creative symbol "Look Within 'The Immortal Wize never a man never a mask a thousand cords a body of soul when the four thousandth is done It will rest on a desk forged in silver carved in memory etched in stone |
Words That Outlive Time (03242026)I was never afraid of being forgotten I was afraid of being remembered incorrectly So I stopped explaining I let silence correct the typos . I let time misunderstand me . The truth The real truth doesn’t rush to be aknowledged . It waits patiently . It watches who distorts it who abandons it who returns to it when everything else fails . I have seen versions of myself exist in other people’s stories that I never lived to tell I did not rush to edit a word What is real does not compete with what is convenient. So I became still Not weak but permanent Not loud but undeniable in my stance the same silence they mistook for absence . echoes louder than a memory of me I did not write to be understood I wrote so that one day when truth becomes undeniable my words would already be there |
The Short Terms (03242026)what you think about the words what you think the words are worth do you like the verse to not forget a word I must rehearse spring back in time put it in reverse relax remind myself to unwind the silver strands let the seasons blow in the wind truly need the breeze to flow my way feels like a different kinda day living in a penthouse in the projects throw a croc at the clock on the wall it didn't fall the test of time stands tall against great odds I feel small what do the words mean cue the rhythm I'll sing like a bird until I sprout wings the dream is reality in the between new vibe new flow is how one grow highrise is far from bellow the bottom is closer than you know "HOW" when one fall then one will know it takes awhile to reach the top but the bottom is just a drop |
Running The Changes (03182026)the silence between us is a bridge where the echo of the chorus plays we strum the strings as we turn the page a thousand different ways to split a solo into a twin flame we always did belong on the same stage carrying notes but if it's a poem we can't call it song |