am I a robot I'm not quite sure anymore am I being serious right now I'm not that sure anymore is this really happening probably but I'm not sure if it is it can be if it is to be possible but being is believing it is I am not a robot I'm not sure if that's quite accurate
The Immortal Wize
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The Is Be (02112025)
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mrmelody7 says: Agree with this I often think that myself that everyone is a robot Cant post on none of these browser get the 403 forbidden Still now and then go to couple poetry sites If I do try to post on this browser poem just disapper have a good one |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support, I too sometimes get 503 |
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The Immortal Wize says: mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support. My last reply was much longer but most of it was cut off it's some spooky stuff going on man, "eyes emoji" |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Wize I agree with your last reply somethin spooky goin on I go with the flow I dont have hang ups about it I just go somewhere Only recently able to pull this up on Chrome but still wont post Thanks a lot maybe its TRUMPITUS |
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The Immortal Wize says: Lol! It's damn sure something floating in the water. I wrote you damnly a whole paragraph but it all wouldn't post, I hope this goes through. I believe it's the same issue Mr. Lowe encountered wish I could help but I'm only the mayor I have no chair. Lol! |
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mrmelody7 says: Oh yeah I hear U yeah its the same as Mr Lowe happen some years ago too I did nothin then one day it just started back posting OK Mayor but unlike the Vibe staff U do reply back or say somethin |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 The admin has been very helpful and responsive in the past but things do happen I'm not sure what that is but it is unusual. |
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