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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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The Loop In The Wire

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it's about you it's about me it's about us it's about we it's about time to stop the beef and the strife why must we fight by the stripes on our back against the ropes the least to be free we get no slack we claim they not like us when we don't like our own we go to war in our home casting stones the builder refused we come too far from when we had pride weak inside from blood we lost and continue to lose we blame them but how come when it's you when it's me when it's us when it's we in God we trust God speed is a must to save you to save me to save us to save we from self induced poisoning

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mrmelody7 says:

Heavy Heavy piece so so true

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